My teacher said that my essay is more like a story than cause and effect. I don
My teacher said that my essay is more like a story than cause and effect. I dont want to change the entire essay; I just want to change some parts to make it more like cause and effect. Additionally, I need more topic sentences. I also need to discuss how COVID-19 has affected Brazil overall. I also need to have around 950 words. Please use simple vocabulary.
*Please change specially this part I was in Brazil when COVID-19 started*
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