This essay needs to be a continuation of order 515644574. i would like the writer 419035 to expand this paper.
I paid for one page the last time, now im paying for a second page. I changed some of the sentences from the order 515644574. I included the edited file and a file with my comments on it that need to be in the revision. please follow the guidelines i included in the previous order 515644574, because this is an expansion of that paper. i need each paragraph to be expanded, include more evidence and direct quotes with in page citation. i know that i picked mla format, because i dont know any other so please dont mind that and just incorporate direct quotes. the comments on the essay are very specific so please read that document. thank you. it needs to be 2 pages in total (including the first draft, so that just means expand it by one page)
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Discipline: writing 106
