The original instructions were Write a 12 page paper about Using AI to combat cybercrime be sure to focus on laws and policy issues in the related to this topic as opposed to, for example technical explanations on how AI works.
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Please add more citations were needed. I have highlighted some areas citations are needed just remember if its not your or you are making factual statements you need to cite.
You need to link the legal analysis to your papers argument. The argument is: AI is an effective tool against cybercrime. Any law and policy analysis you include, should relate to that argument and strengthen the argument. The laws and regulations that you include in the paper, most have a associated analysis. They must directly relate to the Ai argument. See if you can make the link between your law and policy analysis and the papers argument stronger or more clear.
There is some areas in the paper that does not relate to the topic of AI. Please stay focused on the topic in the paper. Anything different takes away from the papers focus. limit your scope as much as possible.