This is a cyber security white paper for my masters, currently 3 weeks over the due date. I has been hard coming up with a topic that is slightly unique as I am suppose to push the understanding of the community forward. I have written a paper thats about 18-19 pages long which is fine for length. I really just need someone to go through my paper and make sure its logically consistent and help order and reorg it. I havent written the abstract or conclusion but I am struggling so either that or I will write it after the edits. Feels like I have been vomiting onto these pages for 2 weeks and I dont think its readable. Please rework it/ reorder sections or change it up slightly to make it flow better.
